Sunday, 28 April 2013

School essay #17?

          It all started the day my headmistress called me into her office. My name is Zac, I am a hexchem-engineered supersoldier created in a weapons laboratory for the purposes of war. However I was rescued and adopted my by two loving parents who raised me as a normal child. I had always been different from other children as none had my powers of strength and flexibility, so my parents were always doing their best to teach me from right and wrong.
          I was already aware of why I was being summoned as I recently sent a few students into the hospital with broken ribs and fractured arms. However, when I arrived at the office it wasn't the head mistress that was waiting for me, instead it was a man with the scariest aura around him. He told me not to be afraid as I was not in trouble, in fact he told me it was took as a self defense situation so I was just going to be alright. However, I paid no attention to what he had just told me. The only thing that was running through my mind was who was this man and what happened to the headmistress. But the next thing he said grabbed my immediate attention. He said to follow him back to where I originally came from. At that time, I didn't know a thing as I thought I was just an ordinary school kid. Puzzled by what he meant I wanted to question him about it when he suddenly attacked me. With my strong reflexes, I managed to dodge him and sent him to sleep with a knock on his head. After that I immediately ran home. 
          As soon as I reached home, I stormed the house looking for my parents but they weren't there. Instead, I found a note on the table stating "If you ever want to see your parents again, step out of the door and surrender yourself to us." As I walked out of the house, I noticed I was surrounded by people wearing lab coats with guns pointing at me. I was confused, afraid and worried at the same time. But after coming back to my senses, I shouted "Where are my parents!?" That's when out of the crowd of scientist pointing their guns at me, a man slowly crept out of the shadows. It was the same man at the headmistress office! He then told me his name was Dr. Xavier Rath and explained everything to me, about how I'm not human, how I was created for war, how my parents stole me from the laboratory. Everything was a big shock for me at that time, but after some time thinking, again I asked of my parents. He said they're fine and he would only released them if I promised to come quietly with them. I agreed with him and they led me into a cage.
          I saw them release my parents and with relief, I just sat down in my cage. Although my parents were crying and were begging they released me, I thought that this was all just for the best. However, when we were about to leave, one of the scientist shot my parents. I saw my parents went down and were lying in a pool of blood. Enraged, I burst with anger, destroying the cage and the truck I was in. That time I heard, Dr. Xavier shouting at that scientist that shot my parents "You fool! You were supposed to kill them after we left!". Those words made me even more angry. With my superhuman strength, I charged towards both the scientist and Dr. Xavier with the intend to kill. Dr. Xavier shouted "Stop him! Don't let him get any closer!". Bullets were being shot at my way like rain, but non of the bullets seemed to hurt. In fact, just like the rain, they bullets just bounced off my skin. I was literally bulletproof. 
          I leaped on to Dr. Xavier, pushing him onto the ground! I shouted "You lied! You said you'll let my parents go!". He still daringly replied "I didn't lie. In fact, I did let them go. I just didn't say I would kill them" with a chuckle. I got even more angry and smashed his face onto the ground until the ground itself broke apart. I then continue to kill every other scientist at the scene not letting a single one escape. However, I could not seem to find the scientist that shot my parents down. He was nowhere to be found! After I killed the last scientist, the silence stood there and I was left in a pool of blood. Suddenly, I heard the most evilest laugh. I shouted "Who goes there!?". From the shadows he replied "It's the man who killed your parents!". I immediately chased after him into an alley where I suddenly got caught in a dead end. His evil laugh came again and said "You'll never catch me!". I never heard him again after that. Since then, I traveled as a outcast, being hunted down as a wanted deadly criminal, for the murder of 99 man. I vowed to not rest until I get revenge on the man who killed my parents.

2 comments:

  1. #teach me right from wrong

    great story with the right amount of suspense, action and what not. be careful to edit your work though. there are some mistakes that could mar an otherwise awesome essay.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I shall have you mark my mistakes in the printed copy :D

      Delete